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Loveing is Lovely
Contributed by
The_Callif
on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 11:43:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When i think about her all feelings numb out
I havent a smile a frown or a pout
I am in love i dont have a care
A love this strong is sweet and rare
The love mimics the person that ive fallen for
Shes pretty and smart i could ask for no more
I am not worthy of a girl this fine
I do not deserve to take her as mine
But take her i will and hold her dear
Because of losing her there is a great fear
A girl like her there is not one more
My lovely one i do adore
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2005-01-02 23:43:35]
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Re: Loveing is Lovely
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by ShadowsLuster on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 12:08:08 AM AEST
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| that poem describes my sitch perfectly! I really like the fact that I can relate to it. It's a good poem and it puts a crystal clear image of what you're trying to say. good job, keep em' coming! |
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Re: Loveing is Lovely
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 05:38:52 PM AEST
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| Nice and easy. Really loose, so that anyone in love can get a hold of it and relate. Fantastic!! |
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