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Killed my freind

Contributed by blacksabbath026 on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 11:41:22 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



When i see him, my anger builds to rage
Why did he betray me? we were freinds,
Revenge will be sweet, he needs to pay
The ultimate price, his blood will taste sweet

As i finish my plan and select the knife
I think of the irony, the love lost
We now hate the other, die in mere seconds
Sadly, i will feel no sympathy for this new Judas

His deed is unspeakable and must be avenged
As i creep through the night, the anticipation builds
I grip the knife tighter and remind myself
That this murder has to happen, blood needs to spill

As i see his house i start to cry, we were Friends
But i am incapable of forgiveness, i gather strength
As i approach his window, my moves unheard
I can hear his agony, drowning in hard liqour

I find him, desprately draining another bottle
As i say his name, i can see the terror in his eyes
He tries to escape but the alcohol has captured his mind
He trips, it is time for him to pay, to late for apologies

He starts to beg, somehow hoping it will help
Tears start to form in my eyes as i grasp my knife
Realizing all hope is lost, he starts to laugh
Insanely he laughs as he cries helplessly

I raise my knife preparing for the death of my ex Friend
His blood pours out of his neck as the knife passes through
The blood taste bitter, my Friend died by my hand
As i look at my hands, i see his blood, mixed with my tears

As i fall to my knees i grasp my knife preparing for the last cut
I raise the knife cursing god and myself as if they were the same
I lower the knife and tear my heart with it
There will be no heaven for my tortured soul, just eternal damnation




Copyright © blacksabbath026 ... [ 2005-01-02 23:41:22]
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Re: Killed my freind (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Callif on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 11:45:27 PM AEST
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great write, very dark


Re: Killed my freind (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 11:46:10 PM AEST
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Ok i thought i comment on your poem sense your begging for comments.
Sometimes we all wanna kill somebody and writing it as a poem is better then acting it out.I for one write alot thats in my soul so .
good job.


Re: Killed my freind (User Rating: 1 )
by subchild on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 08:16:28 AM AEST
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You ever check spelling there smart guy..Try it it works well.yOU CALLED me ignorant in your e mail..Thanks alot really..Coming from a Man like you I am pleased.


Re: Killed my freind (User Rating: 1 )
by morgana on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 04:03:34 PM AEST
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kool poem! i can really relate and i like poems that i can relate to alot! plz e-mail me at loserpropertyqueen@.com......my aim's chilibat174
kk
buhbye


Re: Killed my freind (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 05:19:08 AM AEST
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eh, not bad




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