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I Don't Want to See That Look
Contributed by
LilGnefkow
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Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 11:08:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I don't wanna see the look in your eyes
I don't want you to look at me
When all I can do is cry
And pain and hurt is all you see
When all the tears are streaming down
And I just want to run and hide
But all I can do is stand my ground
'Cause I've done my best, I've tried
Copyright ©
LilGnefkow
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2005-01-02 23:08:31]
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Re: I Don't Want to See That Look
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 11:10:28 PM AEST
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Awesome write! Emotional and it has a nice flow.
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Re: I Don't Want to See That Look
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by jonbalser on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 11:11:52 PM AEST
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| in most ways i know the feeling, it sucks when all you can do is stand there and not say a word |
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Re: I Don't Want to See That Look
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 12:23:46 AM AEST
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great expression in this.. I have been there before .. great job
peace and hope
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Re: I Don't Want to See That Look
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by Mangs on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 12:06:09 PM AEST
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love the way uve put it...ive been ther...cudnt have said it better myself...
Umang. |
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