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I need...
Contributed by
breny
on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 10:05:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm really stressed out
I need somewhere to go
to let out my emotions
and let my feelings show
I need someone to talk to
to tell them how I feel
but there's no one but you
and you're not the one I need
I feel so alone
by myself and confused
what i need is to .....
but then I will feel used
can someone please help me
take me out of this .... hole
the light I need to see
I need to only be a soul
Copyright ©
breny
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2005-01-02 22:05:49]
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Re: I need...
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by inoc on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 10:14:51 PM AEST
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a deep hurting lonely poem...try
..looking up to the light above that hole and catch onto the rainbow streaming through
Hold on tight and get ready to land on beautiful green grass surrounded by sweet smelling flowers....I could go on...feeling better now?
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Re: I need...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 10:39:48 PM AEST
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| Your friend wrote a great poem. |
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Re: I need...
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 12:35:31 AM AEST
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awesome poem!! I enjoyed this tell your friend great job at this !!
Peace and hope
JENNI |
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