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Am i less of a man?
Contributed by
frickinflamer
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Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
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Am I less of a man if I
Stopped following my lie?
Took a dive for love
And followed that little white dove?
To the one I fell in love with when I met?
When I was just a kid denying it?
Am I less of a man?
That I fell in love and admitted I can?
I gave in to the fact.
Love was something I lacked.
But the one I fell for,
Turned away and shut the door.
Am I less of a man if I feel the pain of losing you?
Of not acting like a big shot and having feelings too?
But I see the truth in your eyes.
Sadly, our love for each other never dies.
Admitting that am I less of a man?
Nothing else matters if I you can
Love me like I love you and not fear it.
Allowing ourselves to explicit.
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Re: Am i less of a man?
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by OreO on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 09:04:12 AM AEST
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Oh yes i remember reading this one, i truly think this is beautifully written, I love the lines Love me like i love you and not fear it...i think people let fear stand in the way of so many good things and enclose themselves up from society way to much. I'm one of those people lol...but it gives one alot to think of..thanks for sharing it, i enjoyed it just the same the second time around reading it...
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Re: Am i less of a man?
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by frozensuicide on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 01:01:16 PM AEST
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dont worry buddy. i love you! ill admit it! im off of denial. nice poem! best one yet! hehe!
hug a moose! |
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Re: Am i less of a man?
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by cryingonmyporch on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 11:50:29 PM AEST
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Very nicely written! I like it a lot! Ookay on another note Whats with hug a moose?
Always
Amy |
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Re: Am i less of a man?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 01:20:47 PM AEST
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| its me, frozen, but im not signed it. i like it and mooses need hugs just like humans! |
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Re: Am i less of a man?
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by DistortedSuicide on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 05:01:40 PM AEST
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| I love this poem...love you too! So whos this one about. Any girl in particular? bye bye love |
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