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Imprisoned
Contributed by
Solnubis
on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 07:42:13 PM in AEST
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Imprisoned in my obsession
to commit the worst crime
in the world to take my own life
for the fear of facing it.
Without realizing what I am doing
I am taking a soul before it’s time.
To a world of destructive matter
with no way out to work through the pain.
I am camouflaging my instincts
with no unbelievable reach to the unknown.
My hands are latched in handcuffs.
They are tied up with no room to reach for a solution.
But I myself hold the key to unlock the truth to my heart.
Absolutely no one can help me with this situation but I.
I hope I am able to open it before it’s too late.
Copyright ©
Solnubis
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2005-01-02 19:42:13]
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Re: Imprisoned
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 07:46:52 PM AEST
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| good write. i liked how this didnt rhyme. |
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Re: Imprisoned
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by Sapphire_Blue on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 09:37:08 PM AEST
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| Cool poem, intense reading, short yet to the point, woven well. |
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Re: Imprisoned
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 12:45:59 AM AEST
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awesome write.. don't take your life.. it gets better and you become stronger these days will pass
peace and hope
JENNI |
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