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can you
Contributed by
bre
on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 06:55:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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can you
fell the way i feel
can u do what i do.
can you
wach your self bleed
and wach it tricle down your arm.
can you
think what i think
that your life is not worth living.
can you
stop the pain.
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bre
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2005-01-02 18:55:47] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: can you
(User Rating: 1 ) by poetmarie on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 07:22:54 PM AEST (User
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This is tight and thought out. Well written. |
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Re: can you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 07:40:00 PM AEST (User
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for such a short piece, its full of grammar mistakes. fantastic poem. very interesting. |
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