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retards spell wrong, and i still get raped
Contributed by
x-fetuseater4life-x
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Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 06:21:44 PM in AEST
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i was just a child
with a lovely smile
i love talkign long walks
my mother gave me talks
she said dont go in those woods
i did
but i wore my yellow hood
i loved him so much
and it was sad
but sometimes things happen
and they make me sad
and i still think about it nd cry and think and fall down and my mom comes in and rubs my head
and i was in the woods and a boy told me to show my butt and i did
and i fetl like such a whore
and i still think about it and cry and think and fall down
so i talked to my teacher and she said ok..
you are getting heald back today
she said ur really dumbbb
and you suck ur thumb
and i wore a sadness crown.
and i cried adn i thought and im thinking a lot
and i walked to the stairs to get some gell for my hairs
and i fell right down...on my sadness crown
and i broke it and i was like "wow that sux im hella dumb maybe i should never have gone into the woods with strangers and by myself and wrote about ***** that i cant spell adn ***** and like....yea"
and also my poem was like a conversation...mmmhmmm...ya know? oh i know.
well it was anyways and most of it didnt ryhme but at least i can put it online and have people tell me im ***** stupid....cuz thats fun when you dont kow how to write a lot.....ya know?
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Re: retards spell wrong, and i still get raped
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by poetmarie on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 07:35:06 PM AEST
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| Lots of emotion here. I like sadness crown. |
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Re: retards spell wrong, and i still get raped
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by iodinelove on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 08:05:27 PM AEST
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some nice lines in this.....it's scattered which means you have a head on your shoulders.....but you have to concentrate...and screw spelling....spelling is for nitpicky snops who can't write(damn editors!) but you do need to concentrate more.....this reminds me of one of my ex girlfriends.....god, i liked her more than i let on at the time.....she had this strange hangup on something a teacher said to her in fourth grade.....I had some drug issues.....i say issues because it's really a rather complicated thing....it seems when i get high I just say whats on my mind.....so I told her she was dumb ****.......i really did like her though(love?) ....moving on.....keep writing ^_^
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Re: retards spell wrong, and i still get raped
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 01:21:17 PM AEST
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lol
completely incoprehensible
yer ***** stupid. ;)
you cant ***** spell worth sh!t.
i like yellow hoody and sadness crown with hairs but im sad mon frair that you never got raped.
show yer assss.
lol
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Re: retards spell wrong, and i still get raped
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 08:08:21 PM AEST
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You are a special person to be able to put your feelings in writing.Nix the spelling"Ever heard of Porgy & Bess" some of the best novels used many many so called missed spelled words.
Keep writing you have much to share.
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Re: retards spell wrong, and i still get raped
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by Kittenfantastico on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 07:57:58 PM AEST
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| Awsome, I really get the emmotion. |
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