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Charismatic You
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
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Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 05:44:43 PM in AEST
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Charismatic You
Oh Charismatic you
never realize yourself, you
never realize what wonderment Oh
of humbling proportions
me who dances who’s trodden
on his thumbs or so i see and hear.
Picture like this or so
let me be diamond clear.
You are breathtaking beauty and
so many times I have thought
i will never see you again.
never be able to and i am curled in upon myself
like this: :’(
* * *
Amphibian Commander you must absorb
this you must know in your heart…
more so than a blue sky on a blue day more so than
this you are,
My Inspiration.
Every day I put my good
foot forward or my bad
foot first if i choose to hobble but that’s me
running off on a rabbit trail and either way
like i said and like i say
Thinking about you gets me up in the morning.
About how you work so hard and you’ve done
so much with yourself in so little time…
If I could be half as good as you
I’d be the best at what I do…
(ahem its me drinking koolaid or tea with another little rabbit on this
trail or that one and i says:
thinking about you gets me up at other times too like this time i was on the bus stop!
says the little rabbit shut up says he the bunny for you
are ruining a romantic moment…
pfffwatevafuggitshedongivash!t i said with a lofty wave of my hand and/or wrist.
Time is getting longer but also drawing shorter
as every day though far away draws us closer, draws us near.
And so Oh
Charismatic you
When you look in the mirror and see
yourself, think for a moment like me.
Hold it close to your heart, believe it is true:
the beauty and strength that I see in you.
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoAbused
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2005-01-02 17:44:43]
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Re: Charismatic You
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by x-fetuseater4life-x on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 05:50:02 PM AEST
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| thats pretty tight...i enjoyed it a lot. interesting writing style, ill have to check out more of ur stuff...peace |
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Re: Charismatic You
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 08:23:24 PM AEST
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| Long read but well worth it to..A good poem here. |
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Re: Charismatic You
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by FleurdeSang on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 08:11:04 PM AEST
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Ah, so there was a point in time when thouest was in love, hmm? Or.. maybe not in love, but infatuated with the qualities of a certain someone that you held dear... You paint her with vibrant colors and broad strokes, modernizing her with strands of rainbow hair and bold eyelashes, purple lips and the soul...ah the soul, what color can this special soul be? It's something to ponder on...
You've made a Dali masterpiece with your crisp words of infinite beauty and surrealism.... As always, my lungs cry for breath, adn for the longest moment, I had no words of praise to give you... So I waited, and thought, and forced my fingers to say something...anything... but all that came out was a long phrase of humiliation stumbling out like teens caught masturbating in Mrs. Sullivan's supply room...
Anywho... sentimental and vivacious, as are all of your writes. Satisfying in every aspect, and I love this to bits!! Thank you so much for sharing with us, cheri. And thank you for being such an inspiration... I will never tire from your poetry. You always have a fresh poem with a different emotion and style. *hugs!* Flawless. All my love. Forever,
Your dear friend/little rose bud,
~*Stephy*~ |
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