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Misjudged
Contributed by
jjones12
on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 05:07:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Everyone alway said,
I had the perfect life,
I was so pretty,
Well one night i snuck out with a some guys from school,
there were a big group of people so i thought i was safe,
Well one of the guys wanted to go one a walk,
So i went,
he started to try to touch me,
i told him to stop and tryed to fight back,
he told me to get undressed and started kissing me,
Finally the rest of the group came,
they pulled him off of me and then he told me he would do it agein,
I then was treated differently at school,
Everyone new,
i didn't no what to do,
i now am safe and sound,
because he is no were to be found...
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jjones12
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2005-01-02 17:07:58]
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Re: Misjudged
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by x-fetuseater4life-x on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 06:14:04 PM AEST
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| at least you didnt get raped in a dumpster....how about you dont run around in the woods with teenage guys...bad choices=bad woodland raping. |
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Re: Misjudged
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 09:19:03 PM AEST
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| well you arent the only one that made bad choices. you put yourself more at risk, but he made the bad choice to do what he did. |
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Re: Misjudged
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by humboldthunny17 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:56:31 AM AEST
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| wow thats scary... and i agree, better choices have better endings |
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