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No More Rain
Contributed by
hakiokusaken
on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 04:51:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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got no family, got no friends
I'm writing this as my life ends
Now my heart plays no music
in my head, im mentally sick
out in the rain and left to die
the blood i've lost left my heart dry
on the street dirty and rotten
I'm abandoned and forgotten
I did my time and the labor
now i'll do the world a favor
I grab this knife and did it deep
and slowly put myself to sleep
suddently theres no more rain
it seems i've ended all my pain
Copyright ©
hakiokusaken
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2005-01-02 16:51:45]
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Re: No More Rain
(User Rating: 1 )
by Tru2Myself on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 04:53:38 PM AEST
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| Wow. |
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Re: No More Rain
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 05:06:50 PM AEST
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| A heartbreaking write that's full of emotion. |
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Re: No More Rain
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by EternalNight4x on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 06:19:08 PM AEST
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| excellent write, well expressed |
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