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Birds of Omen
Contributed by
destinysseduction
on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 04:14:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Oh give justice to their wellspring
feathered guests florid
thought,
clairvoyant message invisible for
naught.
Darkness intuitive owl opens gates of
the dead,
Odysseus's hawk clutching dove
proclaim utmost
dread.
Corvid's gifted black charred malevolent
trickster,
drink flow of magic, his
concocted elixir.
Tho' auspicious crane not show malcontent,
he standing one-legged,
I cry solemn repent.
Rooster, red cockscomb cry outspoken
blare,
sign of bold courage his showdown
iced stare.
Envision winged birds of flight, origin of scribe,
birds songs music to
be.
A charged moment makes it an omen, swiftly
weep contrition into a bittersweet
sea.
destinysseduction (c)
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destinysseduction
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2005-01-02 16:14:52]
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Re: Birds of Omen
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 04:24:33 PM AEST
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...I'm stunned again...almost speechless, for if I were I wouldn't be commenting...but seriously a big WOW here, you are an amazing poet and this and all your works are genuine masterpieces
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Re: Birds of Omen
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 05:01:24 PM AEST
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Whoa . . .
I love this. I'll need to reread it later when I have more time, but for the record-- I am very, very much impressed.
Can't wait to read more of your (extremely unique, creative, beautiful) poetry. :)
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