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ALONE*****
Contributed by
morgana
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Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 01:57:58 PM in AEST
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ALONE
Alone in a lie
Alone she dies
Alone in a coffin
Alone when alive
Alone in suicide
Alone in her room
Alone in her cries
Alone in her hate
Alone in her life
Alone in mistakes
Alone in her mind
Alone in her heart
Alone a built in her head
Alone this girl is pronounced dead
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Re: ALONE*****
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by EternalNight4x on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 02:14:55 PM AEST
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excellent write, liked the repetative "Alone in.."
though I don't get "Alone a built in her head"
Well great write keep it up |
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Re: ALONE*****
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 02:58:54 PM AEST
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| You know more often then not I hate ppl who ask for comments..However I gave yours a try and tasted it. I really liked the flow of your work.Your last stanza stood out for me..For what you wrote it worked for me. |
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Re: ALONE*****
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by blacksabbath026 on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 03:35:30 PM AEST
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| usually i hate suicide poems but this is brilliant, amazing i cant hate this, its one suicide poem done right, very good job |
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Re: ALONE*****
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by karmen on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 01:49:34 AM AEST
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| this is a really good suicide poem... i dont quite get the "alone a built in her head" part but thats okay cause this poem ia really good with the way you repeat "alone" and such its a good write... |
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