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A DEATH
Contributed by
morgana
on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 01:56:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A Death
A death so sudden
A death so sad
How could this happen
To such a girl
A girl who seemed so happy
But was truly sad
A death by a knife
A death by her own hand
A death of conviction
A death of the mind
A death un-like any kind
A death by one slice
A death of true pain
For such a beauty
To commit
Is insane
A death of no thought
A death of no care
A death that no-one can bare
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morgana
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2005-01-02 13:56:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A DEATH
(User Rating: 1 ) by The_Callif on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 02:06:16 PM AEST (User
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how sad, ive read your poems they are good too, you seem like a very dark person |
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Re: A DEATH
(User Rating: 1 ) by EternalNight4x on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 02:16:51 PM AEST (User
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excellent dark write. Well expressed keep it up |
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Re: A DEATH
(User Rating: 1 ) by blacksabbath026 on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 03:38:05 PM AEST (User
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very good, there is talent here |
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Re: A DEATH
(User Rating: 1 ) by karmen on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 01:40:14 AM AEST (User
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very good dark poem... |
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