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I Give Myself To You
Contributed by
tractorbabe
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Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 08:22:51 AM in AEST
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would you ever leave me for someone new
ever hurt me or be untrue
ever think that things will last
ever think of me and not your past
this things I wonder cut me deep
answers needed to let me sleep
your everything i wanted and more
I need to know you’ll hold the door
I need to know you’ll always be there
and that forever for me you’ll care.
I need to know your trust is true
and then forever I give my self to you
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tractorbabe
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2005-01-02 08:22:51]
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Re: I Give Myself To You
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 11:41:01 PM AEST
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Sweet poem ! I think we all feel this way towards the one we love,and you represented it with excellence.Nice write,
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Re: I Give Myself To You
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 09:03:48 AM AEST
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nice ending there...kinda short but still a good write...a lil sloppy in form, but good rhyming, keep it up...
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