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New Years Lay
Contributed by
Blackevar
on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 07:06:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
Holiday Poetry
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It is cold outside,
An unyielding savage wind blasts the icy scenery,
I lie in here beneath covers naked with her,
How I wish I was out there,
Or anywhere else,
Our time has passed,
Driven together in early morn,
Lonliness and booze our triggers,
In this grotesque parody of love,
Mechanically fulfilling biological obligations,
With our mind’s on better times,
And better people,
Lying here thinking of the words to set myself free,
Ships in the night
Waiting for an iceberg.
A New Year,
Same old mistakes.
Copyright ©
Blackevar
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2005-01-02 07:06:56]
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Re: New Years Lay
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by darkplaidbabe on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 02:08:56 PM AEST
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I can definately relate to this one...great write...especially the end, very nicely put together and the flow is smooth..well done.
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Re: New Years Lay
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by wray on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:56:35 AM AEST
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| Interesting, altho I don't quite get the ship/iceberg reference. Now we'll have to wait and see if you post the same poem next NYE! |
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