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my new years kiss
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 11:32:16 PM in AEST
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HOW COULD YOU JUST HURT ME LIKE THIS,
was it worth the new years kiss that belonged to me,
HOW COULD YOU MAKE ME LOOK LIKE A FOOL
use my love as an unwanted tool.
I NEVER HID HOW I FELT,
now look at the hand I was dealt.
YOU'LL NEVER UNDERSTAND ME
but maybe it the way its meant to be,
IF YOU CARED A LITTLE AT ALL,
you wouldn't of made me make the call,
but you don't care
i was wrong to care
for once I let my feelings be shared
and was left alone to cry
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2005-01-01 23:32:16]
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Re: my new years kiss
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by faith_my_eyes on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 11:38:28 PM AEST
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| ouch, this is a painful experience... I liked the rawness of this write |
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Re: my new years kiss
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 11:54:26 PM AEST
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| she certainly showed her true colors. hopefully karma will give her a bite in the ..... i have a saying about trust. trust can kill you or set your free, choose your prison wisely. |
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Re: my new years kiss
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 12:04:40 AM AEST
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Ugh...I hate when that happens.
I can understand this alot. Not the part of having a guy stolen, the part where you are betrayed. I can relate to that. I know how it feels.
If you ever need to talk, PM me, K?
Great write. I can really see how you feel in this.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: my new years kiss
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 12:15:11 AM AEST
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Oh me this is sad but mostly very moving and sounds like u got the last word and very smart u r.
A masterpeice as many can relate.
Keep writing 'cause u r an awesome writer.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: my new years kiss
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by iodinelove on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 01:09:30 AM AEST
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life.....aint it great ^_^ betrayal is a part of life, and a common factor. It never hurts any less, but once you learn to limit the trust you put in people and well hope for the best, expect the worst.....you'll be fine.....
p.s. us guys....we're not worth it.....trust me...just let it go.....you gots lots of time...
always, abraham |
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Re: my new years kiss
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by justjonesy on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 04:06:33 AM AEST
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| emotional....great job....i love the style |
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