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wish i could wake
Contributed by
wakegurl77
on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 10:07:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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shocked to wake
turn on the light
slip out of my sheets
it still looks like night
I look in the mirror
but i dont see me
its a good girl i see
but she doesnt have to be
with a wind burned face
and dried out skin
its winter to which
i hate to wake
then........
Gental light graces my eyes
with one breath warm air
i slip out of my sheets
and in to my suit
down by the water
the sun it glistens
and seems to say " your free,
so embrace this sweet day"
to my cold and creamy coffie
and my fresh water lake
its summer to which
i wish i could wake
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Re: wish i could wake
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by Summerwine on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 10:14:45 PM AEST
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Winter in Wisconsin may be a bit cold
But the winter is God's way of renewing the old
So come on now, hop out of that bed
Summer is really not too far ahead...
I enjoyed your poem..take care, Yvonne
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Re: wish i could wake
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 10:17:55 PM AEST
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| excellent write. i also hate my alarm clock. i like waking up when it looks like night though, im not blinded by the sun. and when i dont have to wake up, i wake up when its sunny outside anyway. =] |
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Re: wish i could wake
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by LittleWillow on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 12:35:47 AM AEST
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Yeah, I know what you're saying.... I'm from Stevens Point. Winter in Wisconsin does kinda suck. I can't stand waking up to dark.
Good poem.
Peace and love,
~*LittleWillow*~ |
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Re: wish i could wake
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by TheEarlyNovember on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 02:39:57 AM AEST
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oh man I feel the same way about winter. Only like 3 months till April which is nice. As for the alarm clock I can't relate. My mother still wakes me. God im a loser. w00t w00t
p.s this is my new favorite write |
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