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Tears Of Pity
Contributed by
alyssakoren_03
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Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:45:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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As tears flow down my face,
I sit alone in a hallow place.
Your love I have not,
Pitiful tears I have forgot.
Cruel words I hear no more.
A dream of a beautiful shore.
Banished quickly by reality.
All the sweet thoughts quickly flee.
My voice inside says nothing,
my heart is slowly thumping
Emotions I don't imply
Being my mask i hide.
My thought go askew
I feel as If theres nothing i can do.
Just trying to run away
But instead i run into you.
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alyssakoren_03
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2005-01-01 21:45:03]
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Re: Tears Of Pity
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by highly_flammable on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:58:00 PM AEST
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| amazing. very good start! keep it going. i cant wait for it to continue. |
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Re: Tears Of Pity
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by emystar on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 10:16:26 PM AEST
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Great writing.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Tears Of Pity
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by wakegurl77 on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 10:45:58 PM AEST
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oh.... so sad.... as i read tears formed in my eyes it realates to me as my life is right now and for so long i have been trying to get it out in a poem but its like i have writers block but this is just amazing......everything happens for a reason
Allways Sincere
Leana |
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