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its you
Contributed by
Evilcaf
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Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 07:41:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Its you who broke my sweet loves heart
stabbed him with your cupids dart
then left him, scared and bleeding,
in need of some tender healing.
So little by little his heart I mended
and to his pain I gently tended.
Tho now it seems so unjust,
cos after you, he still lusts.
My love for him is not enough
so this is where I get tough.
If you should ever hurt him again
I'll give you more then just pain!!!
Copyright ©
Evilcaf
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2005-01-01 19:41:29]
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Re: its you
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by breny on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 10:44:35 PM AEST
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its good. I don't think it needs anything. if you need it to say something else than fix it but i think it sounds great! :-D
*Brenna* |
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Re: its you
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 03:06:36 AM AEST
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Very good, strong, asertive write.
Luv it.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: its you
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by Jezabel on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 08:50:08 AM AEST
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| nice revenge luv |
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