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Another Night
Contributed by
dirtyfool
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Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 07:21:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Another night all alone
Another night waiting by the phone
Another night added to worthless years
Another night of burning tears
Another night of no sleep
Another night with nothing to keep
Another night of pointless hoping
Another night of coping
Another night with nothing fair
Another night of learning not to care
Another night of pretending
Another night the broken heart isn't mending
Another night of not being okay
Another night of not knowing what to say
Another night when everything is wrong
Another night that's far to long
Another night of silent cries
Another night the will to live dies
Tonight I lose the fight
Tonight is just another night
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dirtyfool
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2005-01-01 19:21:58]
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Re: Another Night
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 07:25:31 PM AEST
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The rhyming could be smoother..such as..
another night all alone
waiting by the telephone..
but I got the idea..and it was ..okay. |
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Re: Another Night
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by Evilcaf on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 07:52:07 PM AEST
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| another night im up at 2am, i understand take care xxx |
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Re: Another Night
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 02:52:18 AM AEST
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Very sad but a masterpeice.
Greatly written.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Another Night
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by O7NeVeS on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 03:00:57 AM AEST
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| I think it's a GREAT poem! TD |
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