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walking wounded
Contributed by
simon_says
on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 06:33:35 PM in AEST
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i have to finish this
intrigued by this triteness that's taken over you.
Not tonight.
Tonight i make myself feel
how i always wanted to feel
Anything else.
I wanna fly away
i hate my music
i hate every single word i say
the way i don't stand
But soar a few inches from the ground
and a few infinities
apart from heaven.
it's all burning down to you
And you're not
anywhere.
I want more than this
more than life's gentle kiss
before it throws me away
in the darkness.
I feel forgotten
Trying to reach life left me behind
And i stand here blind
And deaf
And continuosly scolded in my misery.
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2005-01-01 18:33:35]
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Re: walking wounded
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by alyssakoren_03 on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 07:03:49 PM AEST
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| ah good poem i feel your pain |
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Re: walking wounded
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 07:32:11 PM AEST
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| This is a great write! Thanks for sharin it! |
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Re: walking wounded
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by LouisaMontagu on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 05:17:14 AM AEST
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Wow, i luv this. felt!!!
Louisa
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