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Second Best
Contributed by
justjonesy
on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 05:30:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Does your face still light up?
Do you still begin to laugh
when you watch the video
and look at the photograph?
Of that night when we danced
like there was no rest
That night I forgot what its like
to be second best
Does your body still fill with butterflies?
Do your eyes still begin to wet
when you remember that night
when we first met?
Well, today you flew back
to your home and to your guy
But ill have no regrets
when I look to that sky
Time cheated us once again
we knew this day would suck
But Im not saying "goodbye"
...Im wishing you luck
Copyright ©
justjonesy
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2005-01-01 17:30:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Second Best
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 05:37:33 PM AEST (User
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wounderful work keep it up! |
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Re: Second Best
(User Rating: 1 ) by breny on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 05:45:50 PM AEST (User
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i have a poem called second best except mine is comepletely opposite to yours. good poem and check mine out sometime. :-D
*Brenna* |
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Re: Second Best
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:51:30 PM AEST (User
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Nice flow. I like this one. |
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