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FEEL
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
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Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 05:28:27 PM in AEST
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I want to feel like I never have,
And probably never will,
I asked you just to hurt me,
But for goodness sake just kill,
Been through life4 don’t know a soul,
Even though I’ve been through it all,
Love I’ve touched, but never hold,
The love I have is better sold,
I better buy it or at least steal,
Cos if I don’t I’ll never feel,
Haven’t always been like this,
Only since our very first kiss,
Became numb with hurt and pain,
Whenever some person mentioned your name,
Walked away from me and left me to die,
Left in a room alone to cry,
But the only tears I cried were red,
Those bloody tears stained my bed,
I’m empty now don’t sense a thing,
Nothing but a painful sting,
The one that you left right in my heart,
The one I feel when we’re apart,
But now I lock the bathroom door,
To leave the world for ever more,
Don’t have a face, don’t have a mind,
Don’t have a heart that I could find,
Just have a knife, the one you left,
The one you told me to cut and cleft,
I fall down smiling the world all mine,
And now its all just left to time,
Leaking from me the fluid of life,
The one that brought me all my strife,
Before you God now I sit and kneel,
I ask these wounds of mine to heal,
To let me know if I was ever real,
And for my numbing skin to feel…
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Re: FEEL
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 05:41:52 PM AEST
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long and depressing keep up the good work.
Some day you'll feel happyness and love again. |
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Re: FEEL
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by cj_ranson on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 07:22:53 PM AEST
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| Well I think you need to just stop everything. I think you need to just calm down. Your whole perception of everything and way thought is just superficial. Your 14, you still have alot to learn, we all do. And as much as you wanna be, your not more or less 'mature' than most. All this, it's not what you need, you need to re- think over stuff. You can disregard my opinion, but by doing so, I fear that your life will backfire, but yes this is just my opinion. I don't want to critizsise, coz I'm not really in the position to do so. But too me, I feel that you really need to change, not completely, but the way you react and think is fake. I mean, when we were buddies like 6 months ago, I was an idiot and you were, i dunno, you. Now I feel so much different, I am no longer an idiot :0 hehe, some may say otherwise. I can see whats going on here now, and I've said what I thought. Anywho, ignore me if you want, I probably would if some guy just told me how to live hehe. |
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Re: FEEL
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 01:46:40 PM AEST
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This is sad. I hope you feel better.
Spazzo |
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Re: FEEL
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by Hakiokusaken on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 02:12:25 AM AEST
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Wow!!! You have pulled it off again. You never stop to impress me with your poetry. Excellent write. I can only hope you express these feelings in your poetry and not in your actual life. Keep up the good work.
Your Friend
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Re: FEEL
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by Dizza_13 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 08:18:18 PM AEST
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i dont know whether criticism is the right way to help
you here, but i do think u need 2 look around and see
the people who do care. its true that your in pain but
thats why your real friends are here. Its hurts so much
to see you like this after u seemed so happy, maybe i
was wrong, maybe u were never happy, i guess i dont
know u anymore. but i wish i did, i wish everything
was better but if i dont know u i guess wishing is all
i can do. i still here to talk 2 and maybe ill find that ur
still the loretta i know, i hope so.
love always,
diz
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