|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
the nature of death....
Contributed by
thegurl
on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 03:51:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
|
the sky was grey
her eyes were fading
crimson rain was falling
it was thick and oddly familiar...
something like the liquid in her veins
flowly slowly at first then faster
the thunder was crying out to her--
screaming her name lilke a banshee
foretelling the death of her heart
how it would fall crash and melt
the hills beneath her rolling in anguish
despair was lighting the skies
yet she could not see before her
hate was consuming her eyes.....
forcing them to drown in a milky haze
turning towards what was once the sun
she blinked and stepped off the cliff
and fall into the freedom of death.
Copyright ©
thegurl
... [
2005-01-01 15:51:36]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: the nature of death....
(User Rating: 1 )
by the_Ghost_Moth on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 04:38:11 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Well, I just think it's pretty cool stuff.
Dane (deadreckoning1983)
comes up with stuff on the spot
too,
so that's okay.
--Ghosty |
|
|
Re: the nature of death....
(User Rating: 1 )
by LevyMetal on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 08:44:40 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| It was a little unclear and shifty at first, but i think the ending makes up for it. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
