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What a new Year
Contributed by
clowns_can_burn
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Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 03:30:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Another great new year to be lead into great Disappointment
Leaving me out in the cold, what friend you are
astonishing how you call yourself a person
As i hold this apparition in my arms
Never wanted it to be like this
But you stayed long enough for it to happen
Leading into a immense area of sentiment
Now enclosed in your own filth
Intended for me show you the direction of help
Only to collapse strait into an additional new year of Disappointment
Trampled your intuition of me
Only to know Next time I wont help
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clowns_can_burn
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2005-01-01 15:30:59]
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Re: What a new Year
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 05:51:55 PM AEST
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| great poem on how disappointing on how people and some years could be. |
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Re: What a new Year
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 06:18:14 PM AEST
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I can relate to this disappointment and
depression that you write about. While I liked
the overall poem and how you make the
reader empathize with you I thought the poem
itself was written rather awkwardly.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: What a new Year
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:20:16 PM AEST
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| Sounds disappointing but well-expressed. Blessings. |
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