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Hello Grave
Contributed by
scott
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Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 01:43:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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It came upon a midnight clear
That I was cleansed of all my fear
And I left my body-that warm curse
And Fate took my hand in hers
Above it all we floated high
The stars were gone, the moon was nigh'
And then. before my eyes unfurled
A vision of my troubled world.
There it all was, laid out below
All i once was, and how i've grown
How parts of me were lost and gained
How I'll never be the same.
And then from the sky I fell
Into my self-created hell
Before a sea of my own love and hate
I now found my helpless self prostrate.
And out of this scene so strange
Fate appeared and said I had to change
"You need a little less hate and more love
You need a little less hawk and more dove"
That evil mistress had called my bluff
And now I'm filled with love-more than enough
More than I really want, or so it would seem
Now that I've waken from that dream.
I live on time that fate doth lend
All that I know is that it will end
I know not what part I play in her plan
But here I am, a walking dead man.
It came upon a midnight clear
That I was cleansed of all my fear
"Hello, grave" I said with a grin
I kissed my coffin, and climbed right in.
Copyright ©
scott
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2005-01-01 13:43:48]
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Re: Hello Grave
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by Tanna on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 02:12:50 PM AEST
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I read and re-read this one. It kinda pulls you into it. Liked it a lot :)
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Re: Hello Grave
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by breny on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 03:15:04 PM AEST
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it took me a minute to understand it but now i get it and i think it is a great poem :-D
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