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Clutch
Contributed by
worldwise
on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 11:07:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The night sheds her wings about me
As if to say she was sorry
I was cut out
Bled to the earth
and through tears I drink
I can become alive again
Standing tall and alone
Looking still for a shadow
A twin
Or something more
To stand in and make this whole
Ill eye you once more
Endure
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2005-01-01 11:07:07]
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Re: Clutch
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 11:30:30 AM AEST
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I'm not sure I would classify this as "dark" since it leaves a little hope at the end. "a shadow
A twin Or something more" -- that which you are looking for, makes an impression on me as it is something many people feel. Wonderful write! Cheers! |
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Re: Clutch
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by bonita2689 on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 12:17:27 PM AEST
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| A very interesting and powerful poem. Nicely done. |
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