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Caram with Father
Contributed by
rpnsk
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Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:02:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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Slow beginnings, slower ends,
Bishoo and his son, stack the tree
With counters, race to red.
A cuff for mirth, a tear for shame,
In the corner he stands, that subtle
Joke slipped past him.
Imagine an uneventful gathering,
Barely understood, the son broods,
Rages and shuts the door.
That subtle courtesy, an agreement
Of academia so forced, and strained,
So compulsory and natural.
The son, he slipped into sarcasm,
A seditious distaste for everything
Bishoo.
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rpnsk
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2005-01-01 09:02:03]
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Re: Caram with Father
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by Sir_Odd87 on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:09:06 AM AEST
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| Well, I THINK I get it, but... Well, I liked it, despite the, the kinda abstractishness... |
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Re: Caram with Father
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by someone2004 on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:20:26 AM AEST
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| Yeah, thats good. |
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