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Thinking of My Love
Contributed by
Sir_Odd87
on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 08:15:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You tell me that you love me,
And I've told you I love you,
But no matter what comes to be,
This will always remain true
Since before I've known you,
You've dreamt of the sky,
But unless you want me to,
I can never say good bye
You can go away,
But no matter what you do,
I will find a way,
To get myself to you
I love you Mem,
I tell you this is true,
In fact, I'll tell you again,
I will always love you
Copyright ©
Sir_Odd87
... [
2005-01-01 08:15:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Thinking of My Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mesano on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 08:45:06 AM AEST (User
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aww cute poem, great job, love the ending :) keep it up
-Nicki |
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Re: Thinking of My Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mitternachtmann on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:38:10 AM AEST (User
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Wow, you really like this "Mem" huh? Love is a sweet and delicate madness, isn't it? |
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Re: Thinking of My Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 02:31:09 PM AEST (User
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Very lyrical...sweet too....well written |
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Re: Thinking of My Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Blackevar on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 07:16:28 AM AEST (User
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So sweet I think I may have developed diabetes just reading it! |
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Re: Thinking of My Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 03:51:06 PM AEST (User
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Good expressive write |
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Re: Thinking of My Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by xofireangel27 on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 12:45:59 PM AEST (User
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awesome poem, very sweet, it reminds me of the love i had for some one before he went and hurt me |
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