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False Face
Contributed by
alyssakoren_03
on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 12:57:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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"How are you?"
"fine"
(i put on my false face)
"everything been going good for you?"
"it's all great"
(i put on my fase face)
" are you sure you don't seem yourself latley?"
"oh, ive just been busy"
(i put on my false face)
"god treating you good?"
"yea i guess"
(i put on my false face)
"How are your friends?"
"okay"
(i put on my false face)
" is there something wrong you haven't smiled in forever"
"no i just have a lot of things on my mind"
( i put on my false face)
"are you sure?"
"ya it's nothing seriouse, just a stage"
(help me)
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2005-01-01 00:57:01]
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Re: False Face
(User Rating: 1 )
by killingmehslowly on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 01:04:32 AM AEST
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| i like it. Different from what i'm used to...but i can relate. I've had many a conversation like that. Good job. |
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Re: False Face
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 01:33:13 AM AEST
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| doesnt seem very poetic. and repeating putting on a false face isnt needed. sometimes a cry for help isnt heard, but a masked one certainly wont be heard at all. |
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Re: False Face
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by FirePrincess on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 07:11:00 PM AEST
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| alyssa if you ever need to talk about anything i am here for you...lovin ya always ~Em~ |
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