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Just a feeling
Contributed by
Kellros
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Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 05:08:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I once wore a gown made of pure silk,
it was yellow with a holy glow,
the more I preached the more i learnt
that hate was waiting inside,
still an ember glowing bloodred,
with a feeling tearing self open,
a feeling of death.
Speaking to the world,
everyone deaf to a voice,
to be heard is hard but to listen is choice,
even though people break down,
people cry, people still move on
even though people still lie,
people still act, people die,
people are everything,
but everything is a lie.
Growing restless of just a feeling,
a feeling of fright, just like you,
i get frightened to, but its just a feeling
and the truth that hate is just a feeling,
doesn't the truth scare you to?
Copyright ©
Kellros
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2004-12-31 17:08:22]
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Re: Just a feeling
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by bonita2689 on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 05:22:04 PM AEST
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| This is a poem to make you think... nice job :) |
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Re: Just a feeling
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by blacksabbath026 on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 05:22:09 PM AEST
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| very nicely done, excellent poem |
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Re: Just a feeling
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by Stitch on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 05:13:28 PM AEST
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WONDERFUL to see you on tonight!
I often wondered what had happened to you.
This is quite interesting and deep. There are a few spelling and punctuation problems you could clean up to improve it, but on the whole a very nice write.
Stitch |
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