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Here In My Bed...
Contributed by
BuggY
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Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 03:23:01 PM in AEST
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I’m sat here in my bed,
Feeling like I wanna try n commit suicide,
N hopefully die!!
If I try,
And come out alive,
I would sound really hypocritical!
N all I’d get is ***** from ma parents...
“What the hell did you do that for?”
(Slap)!
Or “you’re grounded”!
They won’t bother to find out why I did it!
They’d just ground me with their lil ‘parent powersLil'
I swear!!!! If they hit me or ground me ONCE more for no *****in reason. . .
T*****in'it!! I’m out of here!
I’m sick of it all!
I hate my life!
No ones here. . .
I see a whopping vein on my wrist!
Will I? Won’t I?
I guess. . .
Hmm why not?!
All red now!!
Will It Bleed?!
Man it hurts. . . I don’t give a ***** really!!
Nothing can hurt more than my heartache!!
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Man, its *****in red!!
I know what I’m doing aint good!!
I know you’re not happy,
I know you’d much rather see me lying in the corner of a room somewhere crying...
Curled up in a ball, tweaked outa ma mind dying!
I dislike you,
That would be harsh words. . .
I like being harsh. . .
Or do I?!
Oh ***** it!!
I *****IN HATE YOU!!!
Copyright ©
BuggY
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2004-12-31 15:23:01]
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Re: Here In My Bed...
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by poorgirl on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 04:58:52 PM AEST
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Re: Here In My Bed...
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by breny on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 05:08:15 PM AEST
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that is horrible. i have known many peple that have attempted suicide and succeeded. i know life is hard but u just have to learn to deal with it. those are my words of wisdom
*Brenna* |
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Re: Here In My Bed...
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by BuggY on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 06:26:41 PM AEST
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| Sorry?! |
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Re: Here In My Bed...
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by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 11:06:18 PM AEST
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| This is a story? I don't think soo.. it's you feeling sorry for yourself..maybe you should be over in the Indian Ocean with people that really have problems.. |
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Re: Here In My Bed...
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by BuggY on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 08:28:04 AM AEST
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| I wrote this a VERY long time ago!!! and if u must know ive sent £300 of MY OWN money over there and if u must no my uncle and his family are over there!!!! so dont go saying that bull*****!!! |
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Re: Here In My Bed...
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by Mesano on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 08:38:29 AM AEST
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dont worry about her buggy... i can relate to this poem and i love how you are able to capture so much emotion in your poetry... dont let other members put you down like that, if poetry is what you do, then keep doing it.. i use mine as a sort of self therapy and it just so happens that people enjoy reading them... just dont let anyone put you down, if you want to write poetry, then write it
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Re: Here In My Bed...
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by BuggY on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 08:40:37 AM AEST
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Thanks Nicki!!! I just hate it wen ppl mis judge u!!! it really p***es me off!!!! Thanks again!!
Hayley xx |
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