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the old you, the new
Contributed by
weezer21
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Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:29:10 PM in AEST
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i wish i could explain how you make me feel
told me you loved me and that your love was real
now youve changed and what can i say?
your a jerk to everyone around, even to this day
after me, you went to my friends
they fell for your tricks once and again
you hurt them more and more
and used them to their hearts core
but for me it was different because you weren't that guy
loving was automatic and you were kind of shy
hating everyone around but me
it made me feel special and you began to see
that i started to let go of my strong locked heart
i let you inside and you tore it apart
your new popularity led you to this
and people started to believe the lies and your kiss
of course i miss the guy that you once were
but now that your gone...thats all just a blurr
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Re: the old you, the new
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by someone2004 on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:46:00 PM AEST
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Great poem!!
Yeah it talks about something thats happens to a lot of people. |
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Re: the old you, the new
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by breny on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:53:26 PM AEST
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this is a really good poem and m sure a lot of people in here can relate...well at least i can :-D
*Bren*
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Re: the old you, the new
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by Kitty_cat on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 02:23:47 PM AEST
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I can totally relate to this, as well as many other people. well done.
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