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new year,new thing
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:23:27 PM in AEST
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dedicatedpoems
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Come alive in 2005,
laught, sing,praise
the king.
we have been redeem.
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2004-12-31 13:23:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: new year,new thing
(User Rating: 1 ) by someone2004 on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:53:25 PM AEST (User
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Thats good.
It's short but it flows well.
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Re: new year,new thing
(User Rating: 1 ) by breny on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 02:04:14 PM AEST (User
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i like really short poems because they get down to the point and say what you want them to say. good write :-D
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