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So Wierd
Contributed by
kailadragon
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Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:09:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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so wierd
how things are coming apart
the threads that hold the norm
are fraying and broken
all we know is coming apart
four people
dead on holiday
three mothers
one son
all associated with my school
two before christmas
two yesterday
and i feel the emptiness
that so many of my friends feel
because i know how they feel
loosing one so close
but that leads me to wonder
with all these people i know
gone
what is it like on the other side
can they realy see us?
who knows
*in memory of: Gail Parker, Amy Bevill, Kelly Williams, and Jeremy Lara, may you rest in peace and never be forgotten*
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2004-12-31 13:09:58]
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Re: So Wierd
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by someone2004 on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:59:15 PM AEST
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| Thats so sad and not to mention well written. I am sorry for all those losses. |
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Re: So Wierd
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by breny on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:59:54 PM AEST
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i know exactly how you feel. 2 sisters from my high school died not that long ago and it really effected the whole school. good write
:-D
*Bren*
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