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Assent, Submission and Resistance
Contributed by
rpnsk
on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 11:23:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Step into the night, the day, the cruel
Uneventful state of apathy: for you
I leave my soul to bear witness to your
Cruelty for I am impossible to tell - a dead-end challenge.
Slip into forgetfulness, the acquiescence -
Your tone is maddening! Why do you persevere
In inquiring, searching, bewildering. Did you know that
Immortality is gained through sacrifice? Ha!
It’s laughter versus the bedroom and the pills.
The endless numbers, bills and drills and sounds
Of summer, the melancholy and nostalgia
Pricks at the fading self-phrenology.
Shelf Descartes, shelf Nietzsche, shelf
Plato himself! Your logic is absent, mine
Is fading, the shroud of ever-nearing
Fate draws, and falls into obscurity.
Copyright ©
rpnsk
... [
2004-12-31 11:23:01]
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Re: Assent, Submission and Resistance
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by blueeyedevil13 on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 11:25:43 AM AEST
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| amazing. |
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Re: Assent, Submission and Resistance
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by newewe on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 03:29:09 PM AEST
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| I am going to have to cogitate on this for awhile unless you think it is obvioous........doug |
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Re: Assent, Submission and Resistance
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by waos on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 06:35:13 PM AEST
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cool, that was good, thought provoking...
intelligent, advanced word choice... i liked how
you had the rhythm going on, that was interesting.
~waos |
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