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Torturous Emotions
Contributed by
Mesano
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Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 05:40:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tortured by emotions,
So painful and slow,
Confused and torn,
Having no place to go.
Trying to run,
Hoping to forget,
But held in place by,
The things I regret.
Love and hate,
Pain and sorrow,
Never finding,
A better tomorrow.
Darkness surrounds,
Opposing the light,
Reminding me of me,
And the things that I fight.
But every time,
I do find a way,
And I always remember,
It's just another day.
Copyright ©
Mesano
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2004-12-31 05:40:30]
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Re: Torturous Emotions
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 05:47:43 AM AEST
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this is great! seriously wicked poem and i can relate to the feelings ur trying to describe.
"Trying to run,
Hoping to forget,
But held in place by,
The things I regret." i love that stanza and i love the way you turn the poem around in the end...its the last thing u expect. well done |
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Re: Torturous Emotions
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by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 06:16:00 AM AEST
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| Very good. I loved the flow to it and the theme doesn't trip up anywhere. Great write! (^_^)v |
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Re: Torturous Emotions
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 09:07:14 AM AEST
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| Beautiful write, you really captured the emotion in this piece. |
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Re: Torturous Emotions
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by Dawny on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 04:12:00 AM AEST
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Excellent Nicki (did I spell it right!!??)
You have captured so much emotion, and the flow and pace are great.
I continue to be amazed by your writing with every new poem, I cant believe you are still at school!!
Keep them coming, this was excellent, really enjoyed it
Love Dawny xxx |
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