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I Smile
Contributed by
Riot_Girl
on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:45:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Sadness has overcome me
as I stand in the pouring rain.
These thoughts are mixed with voices
plus my powerful pain.
I want to end it all,
I cant take this shame.
How about now,
I have nothing left to gain?
My light blonde hair hangs before my eyes
to cover the dark, dark brown
because this darkness
gives to be shown.
I lean my head up and look at the cloudy sky,
night is always day it seems
as my heart says and
it creeps.
My happiness leaks from my cuts
as well from my tears.
Hope was reachable,
now feared.
I feel so alone in my quiet little world
of Technicolor; black and white.
Thats why Im the only one here;
Im afraid of the light.
Im soaked now
I wish I could be warm,
but thats not an option
in this cold wet storm.
Dicing my hands and arms isnt an option either
its time to take it to the next level.
I Search and I find the spot.
I know this will leave a mark forever.
I hold my knife tightly in my hand
and I slowly slit my wrist.
Now tears and blood are
off my long list.
I feel it's painful sting
as I drop the knife.
This will be the last event
in my life.
Blood drains from my cuts
and I feel lightheaded.
I know this is almost over,
my destination has landed.
I Fall to the wet floor as I watch
night turn to day
And Technicolor turns into colors
as I quietly lay.
The bright light blinds my dark eyes,
Which now turns into baby blue.
The rain I can feel on my skin
now feels like glue.
I absorb the wet rain
as my pale skin turns into radiant pink
and small freckles emerge on my face
i feel i have finally closed the link
I look at the blue cloudless sky
and the green soft grass.
Am i finally free
at last?
My frown turns into a smile
as I slowly stand,
and I wonder
why am I so glad?
I realize I let pain and suffering
Hind me from my goal
and now
I'm finally a living soul.
The knife fades,
my cuts heal
and I cant believe
This is real.
I feel free and happy now
in this wonderful place,
and for the first time
I have a smile on my face.
Copyright ©
Riot_Girl
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2004-12-31 01:45:53]
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Re: I Smile
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by forgottenone_iam on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 03:05:43 AM AEST
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| wow that was a powerful poem i liked it, i used to cut but i dont anymore, i have promises with friends, and expecally my boyfriend, and i know its not the way to go and i hope you dont do that anymore, its not good. but keep writing. KIMMIE |
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Re: I Smile
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 06:19:18 AM AEST
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this was so sad and very touching...again somehow i can relate to this poem and it feels like i wrote it lol. its great.
"My happiness leaks from my cuts
as well from my tears." that is an awesome line and i can relate SOOO much
"I feel so alone in my quiet little world" and that line is just so amazing. this is brilliant poetry..poetry that many feel and can relate to. love the ending! |
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Re: I Smile
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 10:42:36 AM AEST
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| I was so touced by this poem created by a very talented poet. The emotional content was felt deeply and the image became very clear through the minds eye. Great Job. I loved how you started with sad hurtful emotions and ended with a happy glowing emotion. Very well done. I want to Thank You for sharing your gifted craft of poetic words with the world and your fellow poets and for sharing a little of yourself as well. Please keep your fingers stroking those keys creating Your beautiful poetry for everyone please. Your Reading Fan. MickeyPigKnuckles :) |
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Re: I Smile
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by dartsofplsre87 on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 01:16:33 AM AEST
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| This is a really sad poem...I hope you feel better. |
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Re: I Smile
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by TheEarlyNovember on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 01:31:45 AM AEST
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| If this wasn't an actual bluff. It wouldn't snow where you'd be going. |
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