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Dark revenge
Contributed by
blacksabbath026
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Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 10:44:32 PM in AEST
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Brutaly beaten, savagely cut
They left him there to die
Brutaly beaten, savagely cut
They left him there to die
As he is laying there
Preparing for death
He prays, he prays for help
Suddenly he stops
Realizing the truth
He must help himself
He cant rely on god
If he is even real
He must get up
He must heal
Most importantly
He must get revenge
He has lost all faith
In god and mankind
He is now filled with hate
He wants them to regret
Ever being born
He wants their blood
Thinking it will kill his pain
All his hate
And all his agony
Has given him stregnth
To live just to kill
He now gets up
Out of the ditch
He looks up
Into the dark, cloudy sky
He starts to laugh insanely
And he swears revenge
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Re: Dark revenge
(User Rating: 1 )
by K_kelly on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 10:49:52 PM AEST
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| that was so deep, oddly i can picture it all, that was extremely wonderful |
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Re: Dark revenge
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 10:57:10 PM AEST
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| i agree with kelly. fantastic write. |
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Re: Dark revenge
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by TaintedSoul on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 08:24:58 AM AEST
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The mind is a powerful tool. Enjoyed.
peace
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