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My Immagination Has Now Trapped Me
Contributed by
XxNights_ChildxX
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Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 10:21:36 PM in AEST
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In this secret oblivious silence,
I hear nothing but this song,
How I need so much guidance,
To correct all that I do wrong,
The lyrics seep into my head,
The immages start to appear,
They show life after I am dead,
Of never fading or ending years,
Does anybody join me in this world?
Of rapid pain and unstopable sorrow,
Where emotions are thrown and hurled,
Wishing there was a better tormorrow,
But only am I to return there again,
To the immagination in my head,
As I grieve amongst the falling rain,
Silent and all alone crying in my bed,
I see that world so perfectly now,
When I hear this song replay,
I wish I could live that life somehow,
As I find my dreams slowly decay,
I've had enough of real life's tricks,
And now I can't let go of this fantasy,
The real world seems to be a matrix,
My made up world is better, sadly,
I can't pull myself away from it I find,
I can't break away to be carefree,
This made up world has made me blind,
My immagination has now trapped me.
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Re: My Immagination Has Now Trapped Me
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by emystar on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 10:43:10 PM AEST
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Very good write and certainly can relate.
A masterpeice.
hugg. smiles,
emy |
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Re: My Immagination Has Now Trapped Me
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by blacksabbath026 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 10:57:54 PM AEST
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| very nice, ive been in that positio0n befor prolly still in it now, but its the best place to be |
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Re: My Immagination Has Now Trapped Me
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 11:01:22 PM AEST
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| excellent write as always. |
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Re: My Immagination Has Now Trapped Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 04:25:03 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this piece.Very good |
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