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When death comes
Contributed by
blacksabbath026
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Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 08:45:52 PM in AEST
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How will i feel when i meet death?
Will i be happy or sad?
Will i feel dread or apathy?
Have i been expecting it,
Or is it sudden?
Will i die by a traitors hand or
Will i die surrounded by freinds?
Will a bullet Peirce my heart or
A knife carried by the one i love?
It doesn't matter, death is inevitable
All i can do is expect it and live
My life as full as i can so when
Death comes, i can go with him
Without resistance into the unknown
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Re: When death comes
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 08:46:49 PM AEST
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| yeah i'll comment eat my ***** |
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Re: When death comes
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 09:23:34 PM AEST
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| repeats the same words too many times. the words lose their power, and they lose their meaning. which if a poem was written just for that, the poem would be a waste. it is traditional to form a new stanza with a change in tone. death is a part of life, why worry about a part of life when you are wondering the life you have now away? |
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Re: When death comes
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by Sweetheart on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 09:26:34 PM AEST
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Well for me death is not one bit scary. I'm ready any time because I know where i'm going. I've got a kingdom with God and it will be an eternal paradise. I hope you go to this place too...Its really a personal desicion you have to make.
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Re: When death comes
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by emystar on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 09:32:25 PM AEST
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Awesome write!
Very well said.
It's a masterpeice as is 'cause it touches everyone on the planet.
U have naural talent that all the ifs-n-ands can't touch.
Keep it up.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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