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Barbara
Contributed by
Rhino33
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Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 07:29:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Setting eyes upon you was only the beginning…
of a race toward pleasure, which I’m surely winning.
It will never be clear of why you chose me,
but whatever the reason, I’m truly happy.
I can’t help but wonder, since this happened so fast…
how did I survive without you in the past?
As I look back to then I see no reason for living,
But now I hold on to the love that you’re giving.
I wish this to never end, it’s more than a crush,
each time that I hold you, I attain such a rush.
People may say that we’re not meant for one another,
I simply ignore them knowing I can love no other.
Please don’t leave me Barbara, I’d miss you a great deal.
I fell for you so rapidly, our love has to be real.
When we are together, you send a chill up my spine,
I’m so greatly pleased, that our paths intertwined.
Everyday I’m more thankful that fate brought you to me,
each morning I awake & your face I wish to see.
Copyright ©
Rhino33
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2004-12-30 19:29:59]
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Re: Barbara
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by O7NeVeS on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 08:14:28 PM AEST
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| awww that is such a lovely poem! it's beautiful, i hope that one day i'll meet someone who feels that way bout me. :-) TD |
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Re: Barbara
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 08:23:26 PM AEST
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I wish I could write the same
about a real person.
Aw, Babs.
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Re: Barbara
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by breny on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 08:47:43 PM AEST
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wow seems like Barbra has 1 good man. I hope my bf feels the same love for me as you do for her. He tells me that he loves me and I hope that love includes everything you just described because that is the exact way i feel about him. anyways i gave you a vote of 5. and i think that poem was heartfelt. keep it up! :-D
*Bren* |
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