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once perfect
Contributed by
breny
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Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 06:24:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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lots of time spent together
laughs, hugs and kisses
wishing it was forever
praying, and making wishes
who'd think it could go wrong
this relationship we created
it didn't last that long, we were together
but we never really dated
feelings we once felt
led us to the end
the cards have been delt
they've left feelings to tend
Copyright ©
breny
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2004-12-30 18:24:30]
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Re: once perfect
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by O7NeVeS on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 08:23:25 PM AEST
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| Enjoyed this one too! TD |
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Re: once perfect
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by JD_Hamilton on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:23:59 PM AEST
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| Wow Breny....rock on...been there too... |
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Re: once perfect
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 09:40:06 AM AEST
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Short but expressive.
I just had to check out your first. I see the potential here already! |
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