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Golden Hands On a Rusty Face
Contributed by
Nickolata
on
Saturday, 20th July 2002 @ 07:05:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Such amorality frightens
spoke the doctor’s fancy words.
Such mindscape’s bring instability
the sane of upstanding social antiquations.
Forever hush the silent soliloquies; they speak not for the stable mind.
Oh! How times have changed from old,
how the world does spin out of sight.
Dear boy, the Tangerine skies of the mind you once knew; shall show you not where the true path lies
But the grey of a suit and tinge of a tie,
shall allow see, and there you may become.
A bowler hat worn if prestige shall beckon,
rolling hills making scenery home.
The hands of a watch moving similarly for all
the hands of irrelevance building only hope,
as time, shall never slow.
Copyright ©
Nickolata
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2002-07-20 07:05:53]
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Re: Golden Hands On a Rusty Face
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by matlock on
Saturday, 20th July 2002 @ 07:22:55 AM AEST
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I like your usage of personification. I enjoyed it.
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Re: Golden Hands On a Rusty Face
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 20th July 2002 @ 07:25:48 AM AEST
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Nice to see you back Nick...and you're back in style. This is excellent work with a strong message. Looking forward to more from you.
Love Chrissie x |
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Re: Golden Hands On a Rusty Face
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 20th July 2002 @ 09:12:58 AM AEST
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Hey Nick...
Nice to read ya again
Awesome write!
Daniela
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