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Flower Girl
Contributed by
newewe
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Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 04:58:10 PM in AEST
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Flower Girl
Of Grecian urns and shattered glass
Ancient realms of some lost past
An apple cart on lonely street
Looking lost with heartfelt plea
The lanes and lines which somehow drawn
Take us all hope see the dawn
A flower girl of younger years
Please take of this and do not give tears
I have my own as you have too
A quiet place where flowers grew
This winter cold which takes its toll
Doth leave us all with vacant soul
For when our eyes see winters night
As spring doth come we see such light
They come once more to help our day
And give us joy
Our bills to pay
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2004-12-30 16:58:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Flower Girl
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rhymingron on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 05:26:53 PM AEST (User
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I really liked your use of words.
"Of Grecian urns and shattered glass
Ancient realms of some long past"
This grabbed my attention. Good poem.
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