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My SiR
Contributed by
O7NeVeS
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Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 04:13:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Why was it you who caught my eye
I wasn’t even looking for a guy
Let alone someone my friend already had
If I were to tell her she’d get so mad
You chill in my house for just a few nights
And what do I do? Dream about you those same nights
This can’t be real it’s gotta be a dream
Are you the real deal and exactly what you seem?
Then a week at most had passed
In which your head all I did was gas
Who am I fooling you’re probably a jerk
But I’m the one drooling over your scent that lurks
Now I feel lost, confused, and yet attached
What can I do to stop my heart from being smashed?
Instead of being in my head I wish you at my side
Because it feels so right to be looking at you eye to eye
I know I’m not in love that’s quite frankly impossible
But we fit like hand in glove I believe we’re unstoppable
But this is through my eyes your view is way different
You think I talk to mad guys, but it’s you who I want to be wit
The shirt you left is what I wear to sleep
Because it’s you who makes my heart skip a beat
Being held in your arms I feel as though I am home
But I have a gut feeling that you will leave me all alone
Maybe it’s just me, or maybe it’s just new
Maybe we should be one, instead of just two
There I go again thinking all crazy
But I don’t think it is cuz I want you to be my Baby
I’ve asked you where we should go from here
But yet both our answers are left so unclear
So I am here all by myself to think
With my thoughts, my bed, my paper, and ink
Copyright ©
O7NeVeS
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2004-12-30 16:13:43]
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Re: My SiR
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 05:44:59 PM AEST
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| Wow...very heartfelt...i hope everything works out...just an idea though: Some breakage in the poem would make it easier to read. Thats just my thoughts though |
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Re: My SiR
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by breny on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 08:57:46 PM AEST
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very good poem. but let me tell you from experience: falling for a friends bf or even ex means bad news! but it was very good! i like reading your work so keep writting it. :-D
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Re: My SiR
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by Dec2three198five on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 11:19:37 PM AEST
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| a real experience? Who was this about if you don't mind? 33 |
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Re: My SiR
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by CurtisC on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 02:01:51 AM AEST
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oh the beggining to all of this :) it was nice to see how your feelings evolved for him, especially to read them backwards :) this one is just as amazing as the others, great job tanya!!
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