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Soulless
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 03:28:06 PM in AEST
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I have been left soulless,
I let the devil touch & undress,
I let him hold me & thrill me,
I am now trapped never to be free.
He warned me he would take my soul,
To be satisfied was my only goal,
I fulfilled it in such style,
I let myself go free & so wild.
After he made love to me he left,
Crushed my soul & took my breath,
I lay naked & heartbroken on the floor,
He used me & made me feel like a whore.
I am a shell just existing not living,
I’ve got nothing that’s worth giving,
I wander in the dark alone,
Into my mind the devils been sewn.
There’s no use begging or pleading,
He will walk over me while I’m bleeding,
I can hear him laughing in the shadows,
A place where only he evil dare goes.
Copyright ©
pixie
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Re: Soulless
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 03:55:59 PM AEST
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| This write leaves me curious ...? |
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Re: Soulless
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 04:19:17 PM AEST
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hmm very true since that's exactly what satan
does I hope you are not writing from personal
experience but if you are I know you now
realize that he does not care, but is only out to
hurt you... that took me a while to realize. I
loved this poem I wish I could write as
prolifically as you can.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Soulless
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 04:46:29 PM AEST
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Pixie, I can't get a fix on you.
Your poetry has youthful energy,
but you also write with talent
unlimited to an age.
Proof that the more you write,
the better you get.
--Ghosty |
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Re: Soulless
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by blacksabbath026 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 04:53:48 PM AEST
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| very good poem, ussually most writers of dark poetry on this site focus on self mutilation and suicide which isnt bad, but neways your poem was good, it is dark, i can feel pity for the character it is very good |
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Re: Soulless
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 05:10:37 PM AEST
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I have to say pix that your poetry have no limit.
I think it's so wonderful that you write so well.
amazing.........
love ya hugs |
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Re: Soulless
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by O7NeVeS on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 05:27:16 PM AEST
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| Great write! TD |
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Re: Soulless
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by Rhymingron on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 05:45:31 PM AEST
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| This is really well done. I don't like most dark poetry, you and Poe are the exception. |
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Re: Soulless
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by emystar on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 08:46:59 PM AEST
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Very good writing, my friend.
Satan has jus got people fooled. He can neva take your soul 'cause Jesus paid 4 all our souls at calvry.
He may look-n-feel like the devil but he's human.
very good writing, my friend as always.
Great write tho 'cause sometimes they act like the boogie man.
smiles,
emy |
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Re: Soulless
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by Sinned on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 06:18:45 AM AEST
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You are soooo--good with your writting.Keep it up.
Sinned |
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Re: Soulless
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 10:20:52 AM AEST
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Dark poetry I do not like pixie but yours I loved.
This one was terrific
Love Sweetangelukxxxxx |
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Re: Soulless
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by Kratur on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 11:28:07 AM AEST
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You have found your devil man.
Now will you be my devil woman? |
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Re: Soulless
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:59:28 PM AEST
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Delicious, Pixie. But with the ability to formulate words such as these ... I would say you have much yet to give. I love reading the dark and shadowy recesses of your mind.
Nazzy ~ |
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