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Living Lament
Contributed by
AgeOfAquarias1960
on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 11:15:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Im dying slowly
thats ok so are we all
my heart is breaking
thats alright cause I found you
the world is crumbling
thats just fine I live off crumbs
Im losing the fight
doesnt matter Ive already lost my sight
your spririts aching
Its not ok there nothing i can do
but I love you
Its killing me
Im aching to
upon this rock ill lie
until the day
that I die
but before my existence comes to cease
I swear to you
Ill make my peace
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AgeOfAquarias1960
... [
2004-12-30 11:15:03]
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Re: Living Lament
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by pixie on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 11:16:46 AM AEST
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very dark and sad,
pixie xx |
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Re: Living Lament
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by hellsfallenangel on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 11:34:53 AM AEST
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hey nice write. im going to make my peace soon to. read some of mine there all pscodic ecept for 2 of them please comment bye
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Re: Living Lament
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by The_Callif on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:37:08 PM AEST
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great write,
"the world is crumbling
thats just fine I live off crumbs" |
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Re: Living Lament
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by blacksabbath026 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 05:19:45 PM AEST
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| nicely written, very good poem, i like your writing keep it up |
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