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Nitrous in forms of solids
Contributed by
LevyMetal
on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 09:58:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Its unusual, yes
but unfamiliar, no
I felt this erge to FINALLY TAKE CONTROL!
Im breaking down in pain
Taking out the strongest bone
Every muscle crying LEAVE ME ALONE!
Im waking up in empty bottles and misery
They are taking away my catnip and vitamin c
My face is turning pale
Im struggling to look forward to breathing
I hope this numbness doesnt LEAVE ANY ROOM FOR FEELING!
Im restless in this dark place
I pace back in forth for some type of change
I keep chewing away the edges of MY INSANITY CAGE!
I felt this way before
I hoped its end wouldn't meet its return
My inner cry turns into OUTTER REACHES OF MORN!
Im waking up in empty bottles and misery
They are taking away my catnip and vitamin c
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2004-12-30 09:58:22]
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Re: Nitrous in forms of solids
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by TaintedSoul on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 10:54:04 AM AEST
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WOW! This is such an emotionally passionate write. The raised tone on certain lines really adds to the power here. Bravo!
peace
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Re: Nitrous in forms of solids
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 12:29:59 PM AEST
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| very emotionally packed poem,well done |
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